Short story: They Grow Up So Fast
It's called They Grow Up So Fast, and it's Stephen's (Justin's stepbrother) perspective. Let me know whatcha think! Justin. Hug? I'm wiggling. Give me a hug! No, don't leave again. No! I'll cry. I...
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That was difficult to read. It needs some work, and it'd be interesting to see another story, but from Justin's point of view. I'm a little confused, did he lose his life or was he paralyzed? It...
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I didn't use quotation marks on purpose. It's all from Stephen's point of view. This was his mind. And in his mind, Justin is an uncaring half brother.
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Only thing I'd say my dear is that Cameron wasn't around when Stephen would have been learning to walk - but that's what they call artistic licence
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This reminds me of the song Cat's In The Cradle...
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Quote:It was very rushed, and you need to use quation marks, because I couldn't understand when Justin was talking. No, it doesn't need quotation marks. They are thoughts, not spoken words....and the...
View ArticleShort story: They Grow Up So Fast
It's called They Grow Up So Fast, and it's Stephen's (Justin's stepbrother) perspective. Let me know whatcha think! Justin. Hug? I'm wiggling. Give me a hug! No, don't leave again. No! I'll cry. I...
View ArticleRe: Short story: They Grow Up So Fast
That was difficult to read. It needs some work, and it'd be interesting to see another story, but from Justin's point of view. I'm a little confused, did he lose his life or was he paralyzed? It...
View ArticleRe: Short story: They Grow Up So Fast
I didn't use quotation marks on purpose. It's all from Stephen's point of view. This was his mind. And in his mind, Justin is an uncaring half brother.
View ArticleRe: Short story: They Grow Up So Fast
Only thing I'd say my dear is that Cameron wasn't around when Stephen would have been learning to walk - but that's what they call artistic licence
View ArticleRe: Short story: They Grow Up So Fast
This reminds me of the song Cat's In The Cradle...
View ArticleRe: Short story: They Grow Up So Fast
Quote:It was very rushed, and you need to use quation marks, because I couldn't understand when Justin was talking. No, it doesn't need quotation marks. They are thoughts, not spoken words....and the...
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